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“Your Highness,” Xaile said, bowing, moving swiftly into the room. He bowed again, gazing at Vade as if he were enjoying his memories of what Vade looked like undressed. “Your Highness.” “I can’t,” Vade said quickly, stepping hurriedly behind Selorin. “I’m sorry, I love you, I’d love to, but I can’t. At all, ever again, ever.”  ....PLEASE LET THE "I'm sorry, I love you" JUST BE A SLIP OF VADES TOUNGE !!!! How depressing  I had more to say about the rest of the chapter but now I don't feel like writing...  I'll be back after I get over this....lol
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« Reply #1 on: May 08, 2010, 08:59:37 AM » |
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« Last Edit: May 08, 2010, 09:20:09 AM by SilverMoon28 »
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« Reply #2 on: May 08, 2010, 09:02:37 AM » |
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Okay, so I have something else to say:
“We shall make a deal,” Anosukinom said. “Here.” Setting a table between them, he placed a scroll and ink atop it. “An agreement, between the two of us. If marriage to a woman is imminent, whatever she offers, I will supply. Whether it’s wealth, property, reputation, title, whatever reason you have to marry her, I will provide for you, or its satisfactory equal. Because I love you, Vade, as I love my own brothers, and I won’t see you marry someone unless you’re as in love with him as I was when I first became engaged to Anikira. I was giddy, I was enthusiastic, I was filled with hope for the future, nothing could taint my happiness. She was my life, my future, and I loved everything about her. I still do. That’s what I want for you, Vade, that’s what everyone deserves. And no woman should be trapped in marriage to someone who wants her purse, her land, but not her heart. I won’t let you make yourself and some lovely woman miserable for the sake of gold. If you want gold, I will give it to you.” HE'S GOING TO MARRY SELORIN, I TELL YOU!
*dances with Sue*
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« Reply #3 on: May 08, 2010, 09:32:13 AM » |
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Of course he's going to marry Selorin.......Selorin is now letting him borrow his sex toys. And he's picked a pet name for Vade. I imagine someday Vade's going to enjoy having Selorin call him "kuret".....wonder what enderment he'll call Selorin?
And my only complaint? This chapter was waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too short! I want MORE!!!
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« Reply #4 on: May 08, 2010, 09:48:38 AM » |
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Okay, so I have something else to say:
“We shall make a deal,” Anosukinom said. “Here.” Setting a table between them, he placed a scroll and ink atop it. “An agreement, between the two of us. If marriage to a woman is imminent, whatever she offers, I will supply. Whether it’s wealth, property, reputation, title, whatever reason you have to marry her, I will provide for you, or its satisfactory equal. Because I love you, Vade, as I love my own brothers, and I won’t see you marry someone unless you’re as in love with him as I was when I first became engaged to Anikira. I was giddy, I was enthusiastic, I was filled with hope for the future, nothing could taint my happiness. She was my life, my future, and I loved everything about her. I still do. That’s what I want for you, Vade, that’s what everyone deserves. And no woman should be trapped in marriage to someone who wants her purse, her land, but not her heart. I won’t let you make yourself and some lovely woman miserable for the sake of gold. If you want gold, I will give it to you.” HE'S GOING TO MARRY SELORIN, I TELL YOU!
*dances with Sue* Do you really think that is what  is saying? He will have all those things plus true love with   ? But isn't Xaile royalty to? Can't Vade have those thing with him? WHY WHY did he say I LOVE YOU  Dang you Matthew and your teasing  P.S By the way great chapter 
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« Reply #5 on: May 08, 2010, 09:56:51 AM » |
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Of course he's going to marry Selorin.......Selorin is now letting him borrow his sex toys. And he's picked a pet name for Vade. I imagine someday Vade's going to enjoy having Selorin call him "kuret".....wonder what enderment he'll call Selorin?
And my only complaint? This chapter was waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too short! I want MORE!!!
biggest When  put his hand out to Vade then pulled him closer I got the biggest shiver down my spine.....lol All I thought was ...OMGosh is he finally going to do it is he gonna kiss him or include him !!! LOL I really hope the Blue book isn't next I'm really really not ready for it.  But I will think positive...Go team  /Vade 
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« Reply #6 on: May 08, 2010, 10:16:24 AM » |
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When  put his hand out to Vade then pulled him closer I got the biggest shiver down my spine.....lol All I thought was ...OMGosh is he finally going to do it is he gonna kiss him or include him !!! LOL Ha you and me both! I was practically bouncing on my seat and then when he told him to go to his rooms i was all 'yay!!' Im totally torn between wanting the Blue book, the Gold book and the Red book next. I want them all. xxx
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« Reply #7 on: May 08, 2010, 07:57:04 PM » |
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When  put his hand out to Vade then pulled him closer I got the biggest shiver down my spine.....lol All I thought was ...OMGosh is he finally going to do it is he gonna kiss him or include him !!! LOL Ha you and me both! I was practically bouncing on my seat and then when he told him to go to his rooms i was all 'yay!!' Im totally torn between wanting the Blue book, the Gold book and the Red book next. I want them all. xxx LOL I know I was OMGosh a kiss are we finally going to get at least a kiss  I think I would have cried tears of joy 
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« Reply #8 on: May 08, 2010, 09:13:52 PM » |
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I can't even tell you how much I loved this chapter. I had to read it fast because I had a superbusy day, so when I reread it slower I will be back with commentary.
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« Reply #9 on: May 08, 2010, 10:13:18 PM » |
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Does anyone else think that Selorin is just waiting for Vade to become more mature & responsible?  I've been noticing all through my re-read that there are a lot of little Selorin/Vade moments......just little things like noticing texture/color of hair, eyes, skin. Things that I really didn't pay much attention to the first time around, but that are popping out at me now. 
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« Reply #10 on: May 09, 2010, 02:54:28 AM » |
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I've been noticing all through my re-read that there are a lot of little Selorin/Vade moments......just little things like noticing texture/color of hair, eyes, skin. Things that I really didn't pay much attention to the first time around, but that are popping out at me now.  Ive noticed that too which is why i think the Blue book is next. I dont know if its right or if im just noticing it more but it seems that they are showing up more often in the chapters and if not together they are talking/thinking about the other xx
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« Reply #11 on: May 09, 2010, 07:02:31 AM » |
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*Drops anvils on you all*
Selorin and Vade, together forever!
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« Reply #12 on: May 09, 2010, 07:21:05 AM » |
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*Drops anvils on you all*
Selorin and Vade, together forever!
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Okay.
Ok Vani your right....There just so right for one another in every way and Vade needs to be in OA with Bade....I once had Mr MHT tell me I need to defend those two till the very end and I said I would so im going to... no more bad thoughts for Sue  IM just going to keep telling myself that Vade slipped in his excitement and said those 3 nice words to  So until the end !!!! TEAM SELORIN/VADE !!!!!
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« Reply #13 on: May 09, 2010, 08:24:30 AM » |
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GO TEAM SELORIN/VADE!!!!
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« Reply #14 on: May 09, 2010, 09:02:01 AM » |
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Frankly I think Vade was just in love with the sex.  Wait till he gets to have sex with Selorin. He'll finally get what he really needs. 
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« Reply #15 on: May 15, 2010, 12:38:00 AM » |
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Ok, hellish week or I'd have posted sooner; but I have only one thing to say after this chapter: VADESELORINVADESELORINVADESELORINVADESELORINVADESELORIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pHEW. Ok. So really--lending out sex toys AND calling by a pet name?? COME ON. They are so gonna be together, lol. I kind of agree that in a way, Selorin is waiting for Vade to grow up a bit; but then, I disagree because I'm not sure Selorin realizes it. Its almost as if its unconscious if that makes sense? Like when Vade is ready, Selorin will look at him and go, ok, that is what I've been waiting for.  I really, really cant wait for that. I would totally love the Blue book next. Yes Remin needs to get laid; but he is content for the moment and I need Selorin and Vade!!! And they need each other! 
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« Reply #16 on: May 15, 2010, 08:02:18 AM » |
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« Reply #17 on: May 15, 2010, 09:45:43 AM » |
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I think that Selorin and Vade both have growing up to do. Selorin isn't ready for committment any more than Vade is. I still feel that the Gold Book is next (Remin needs it to be) because Selorin and Vade just aren't ready. Remin, for all that he's calmer now that he's masturbating again, needs his partner. He'll be facing enormous pressure after the wedding with Jacacea's relationship with Orina Anoris coming into fruition and he'll need a release valve. Plus he's such a beloved child of the gods and I can't imagine them letting him be alone any more than he has to be.
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