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« on: March 27, 2009, 03:38:11 AM »

Shoon!

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« Reply #1 on: March 27, 2009, 04:31:30 AM »

I'm tired and need to be up in a few hours for work, but I just have to say, Remin is made of awesome:

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“He started this,” Talin said.  “I’m going to play along until he gets over himself.”

It wasn’t exactly the stupidest thing Remin had ever heard, but it certainly won for the day.
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« Reply #2 on: March 27, 2009, 07:58:33 AM »

Oh!  It's such a pleasant surprise to have 129 early. Nod  Thank you, Matthew!

Talin and Anosanim.   Heartbroken  It's so painful to read.  I love Talin but I agree with  Orinakin and  Remin.  Talin is not handling this right.  Sad Head Shake

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“I’m fond of you.”  Xio Voe’s voice was so deep that it sounded, sometimes, like a rumbling from below the ground.
Floating Hearts Floating Hearts Floating Hearts

And Desin, oh my God!  That was hot!   Shoon, indeed!  Dead Faint
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« Reply #3 on: March 27, 2009, 09:11:13 AM »

This update was so so good!  Red Love And just what I needed this morning.

Xio Voe and Kudorin were lovely in this update. They are so sweet with each other. As well as hot. sexy. beautiful. But this chapter struck me as sweet.

Orinakin = Amazing. The amount he has to put up with and think about is reall really amazing. Bade and Vade's identical reaction to Talin's hair was hilarious. Selorin. Well, we had a lot of Selorin this week -- so that was exciting!  Selorin sidelining up to Bade at dinner though and whispering in his ear - so hot, for really no good reason (other then it is of course - THEM), but it was so so hot.

Remin is fantastic as per usual. love love and more love.

Talin and Anosanim  Doh!  Heartbroken  Cry 
Boys Boys Boys -- omgosh please don't do this to yourselves. Please. It's painful to watch. Poor Anosnaim, I agree with Orinakin and Remin, I can't believe Talin would do this to him.

Thank you for the early update!!!
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« Reply #4 on: March 27, 2009, 09:50:03 AM »

Thank You, Thank You, Thank You for posting early.  I might make it through work today  Cheesy

 Desin sure had an interesting day.  SHOON!!!

I hope now that  Remin told  Talin that  Anosanim won't ever stop he will do something  Heartbroken
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« Reply #5 on: March 27, 2009, 09:51:31 AM »

I am very close to tears here.  I want to smack Talin in the back of the head and hug Anosanim.  Anosukinom and Xio Voe were born the same day?  Did we know that before??
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« Reply #6 on: March 27, 2009, 10:49:22 AM »

Anosukinom and Xio Voe were born the same day?  Did we know that before??

Yeah, I was nicely surprised about that.  Being born on the same day....do we know if they're born on the same time?  Cause that would be soooo romantic. Adore
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« Reply #7 on: March 27, 2009, 11:21:34 AM »

Okay, now I know why Liz has been saying 'Shoon' to me on e-mail during my last 30 minutes at work... lmao.  I actually came home early to read and, while I have tons of overtime to get rid of, I'll have to be at work on Monday at 7 a.m. to finish the mountain I have.

Part 129!!

This review will be quick, cause I wanna watch something on TV (Liz know what it is already lol): hot semi-naked men.

Sorry, part 129!

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His body responded fast, with flame and searing heat, and he groaned aloud, viciously aroused, liking that Ehlee had stalked him, liking whatever Ehlee was saying to him

Desin: raw, pure, animalistic lust.  Whee!

And I've now learned a new word that I can freely use in a chat room without getting banned!  Yay!!!!!!

Shoon!

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Desin forgot about everything else and just kissed him, kissed him hard, plundering his mouth and crawling onto the table.

Pretty pretty pretty.

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“I would say that I am inordinately fond of you.  But I do not believe that one can be excessively fond of a deity.  You are, after all, a god, and therefore whatever my affection is for you, it can never be enough.”

Can I smack him?  What??  Smacking him might make him realize that he's in love with him!!!!!

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“Love is one of the easiest emotions there are.  And one of the most difficult.  It’s simple and complicated, a joy and a torment, wonderfully real and slippery with intangibility.  Love brings out the best in us, if we let it, and the worst in us, if we allow it.  Love is a beautiful and simple and complex thing, Xio Voe.”

It's also tortuous!!!!!!

Uh... I just bust out laughing...

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I don’t care if my brothers see me with your balls down my throat, they’re my brothers.

Matthew... lmao

Suddenly I'm glad I didn't ask Liz to send me the chapter at work.  I might have gotten fired on the spot.

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“You respect my privacy, but you would invite the royal diplomat into a room where I am engaging in very private behavior.”

I wonder what would happen if Kudorin were to invie Xio Voe to an orgy...

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Looking crisp and cold, Xio Voe sat firmly on the throne.  Looking relaxed and welcoming, Kudorin sprawled negligently where the queen usually sat, eating an apple.

 Rolling on the Floor Laughing Rolling on the Floor Laughing Rolling on the Floor Laughing

Don't you love Kudorin?

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“This is a delicious apple,” Kudorin said, quietly munching.

what in the name of Howie does the deliciousness of an apple have to do with anything?  Laughing

My mind just wandered into bondage territory...

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“The ‘male’ partner among the lesbians binds her breasts, and the ‘female’ partner among the men usually tucks his own penis out of plain sight.”

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every one, there must be two.  The sky, and the ground.  The day, and the night.  When you take, you must also give.  When you give, you must also take.  It creates harmony and balance.  It’s very strongly tied into their religion, of course, which is based around a mother figure and a father figure who were once one, then separated.

That's beautiful, Matthew.

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  “Desin, while my love for you knows no bounds, I have more important things to do than check in with your various partners to make sure that they were happy with the service you provided.”

lmaoooo!  And that made me burst out laughing again.

*GASP*

'LIVING'!  'LIVING'!  A NOD TO 'LIVING'!!!!!

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“Mine,”

Yes, I'm obsessed with 'Living', we know that.

Sorry, returning to ITL.

Ooohh!  They were born on the same day?  Did I miss that?  Cause I don't remember that bit.  I like it!!

I have banner ideas again... no, I won't tell you what they are, you'll see them later Smiley

This was supposed to be short!!!!

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In a cheerful mood, he dressed in a vivid orange gown and delicious little heels with delicate laces that wound up his calf.

Pretty!!!!!

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One bracelet.  One, single bracelet.  To the Royal House of Art.  Anosanim’s heart was going to collapse, he could feel it.

Only Talin...

WHAT THE HECK WAS THAT?!

HE MADE ANOSANIM CRY!

His... hair.... his... it's...  he no longer... his hair's gone...

*in shock*

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It was like everything Rini had ever known about Anosanim and Talin his whole life was wrong.

Um... I know it's not really the right way to pray but...

Anosukinom... HELPPPPP!!!

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“I am glad that you have experienced your womanhood, Ehlee.”

Does anyone else feel like radically changing the world until everyone can say that to each other?

Just a random thought.

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“Nisutalin,” he said, lowering his book, “Anosanim thinks that he’s doing this for you, for your sake, for your own good.  Sacrificing himself for you is as natural and important to him as breathing.  He’s never going to stop.”

*unsmacks Xio Voe and smacks Talin instead*

What the heck has gotten into him?!

And Matthew, you always have great timing Smiley

Thanks for the wonderful part!  It was definitely worth getting out of work early!!!

Vani
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« Reply #8 on: March 27, 2009, 01:58:31 PM »

I told you that you were gonna be mad at Talin!!  And stop blaming everything on me, its really all Matthew's fault.
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« Reply #9 on: March 27, 2009, 04:05:32 PM »

Of course I'm mad at Talin!  Doesn't he realize just how much Anosanim loves him and how much it's killing him to watch his only twin pushing him away??  Doesn't he realize how *hurt* Anosanim is?

AND HE CUT HIS HAIR!!!

Granted, he can regrow it in a few hours, but STILL! It's like him not wanting to look like his brother!  It's like him wanting to not be Anosanim's twin!!!

And Anosanim being all brave at dinner and acting like nothing at all had happened.  Awe.

He doesn't understand that the gods will never bless a relationship that will divide the brothers.  Never.

And it's not even Hitari's fault.

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« Reply #10 on: March 27, 2009, 04:21:55 PM »


TALIN!!!!!  Why would you do this?  Why?! 

And your hair.......... Heartbroken

Talin needs to get his butt into gear and talk to Anosanim.  I don't care if Anosanim is trying to creat distance and starts living in Retik's  house -- Talin needs to talk to him!!

And grow his hair back out.

Desin......so hott......I loves me some Desin!!  Drool Thank you for that, Matthew!!

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He’s tried to seek out the feminine experience, but the only men available to penetrate him are several decades older than he is, and, for other historical reasons I won’t bore you with, the Tiha frown upon partnering with someone of a distant age, even for spiritual purposes.

You won't bore me with these historical reasons!  I'm curious about this now!

Kudorin and Xio Voe were pretty sweet this chapter though.  The light bickering about Orinakin seeing them indecent, Xio Voe adoring Kudorin...it was nice Smiley

Remin and Orinakin are smart, listen to them, Talin!

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« Reply #11 on: March 27, 2009, 05:00:46 PM »

Liz and I were talking about Xio Voe's argument with Kudorin about Orinakin seeing Xio Voe in a 'compromising position'.

Personally, I think that Xio Voe needs to stop thinking like the Heir all the time because he's with the most sexual being that ever lived and he's going to marry him.  He also happens to be living in a country where the people are more open about sex than I would have ever thought possible (or maybe not, but you know what I mean).  Liz, on the other hand, brought up a valid point, just saying that she was on Xio Voe's side on that one.

So, really, I agree with both of them.  I understand why Xio Voe wouldn't want to be caught by Orinakin (even though this is Orinakin we're talking about... he and Bade had sex in a balloon where privacy is really nowhere to be found - not that kind of privacy.  Meaning to say that he's not going to be shocked or think any less of Xio Voe.  But I get it.  Being caught in bed with someone can be a little, uh... I dunno cause it's never happened to me, but I know I disliked being caught doing my own thing.  I suppose Xio Voe thinks it'll damage his credibility, integrity, and whatever else.

The fact that Kudorin understands and manages to turn the situation into something comical is great and awesome.  Smiley

This post doesn't make sense anymore, so I'm going to stop here before I ramble off the deep end.

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« Reply #12 on: March 27, 2009, 06:22:31 PM »

There she goes, dragging me into it - without even clarifying my point.  lol  My thought was that I wouldn't want anyone but my partner seeing me in an intimate situation either.
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« Reply #13 on: March 27, 2009, 06:49:53 PM »

I think  Anosanim and  Talin are both to stubborn for there own good.  Sad Head Shake  I think  Talin needs to see just how upset  Anosanim was.
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« Reply #14 on: March 27, 2009, 07:16:37 PM »

I agreee, Sue.  Not sure if he realizes that Anosanim cried for so long after he left, and I'm sure HItari was confused as all hell.

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« Reply #15 on: March 27, 2009, 07:30:39 PM »

I'm sure HItari was confused as all hell.

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Hitari seems to be the only one of the three making any sense, good for Hitari  Clap
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« Reply #16 on: March 28, 2009, 03:21:54 AM »

Never thought we'd see the day that Hitari was the only one making sense... Diamond's gonna read this and go:  OMG! Dead Faint

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« Reply #17 on: March 28, 2009, 03:41:50 PM »

You know that Diamond is going to deny the very idea that its HITARI making sense.  Of course, to me, this just proves that Hitari is the right one for Talin - cuz he's the only one really calling him on it.
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« Reply #18 on: March 28, 2009, 04:01:27 PM »

Isn't it ironic that the brothers whom everybody used to say shared a brain have communication problems? They just don't *get* each other in this.

Xio Voe's a prude!  Giggle Although, compared to Anorians, I would imagine anybody would seem prudish. As Kudorin pointed out though, Jacaceans are at the end of the spectrum for this.

I love that we're getting to know Desin better! “Did he want me, or just my dick?  Did he want sex, or just some spiritual experience?  Was I taking advantage of him?  Was he taking advantage of me?” Concerned about Ehlee and about himself as well. Sex is obviously not just sex for him... otherwise he wouldn't care about Ehlee taking advantage of him when the physical experience was fulfilling. We're still not close to figuring out how Desin's story would shape up!

Having a man experience "what it is to be a woman" is an interesting idea... (even though it's only about the sexual dimension of it).  Hmmm The title of the series is In This Land, but it's about much more than Orina Anoris! I love how we're experiencing different cultures' views on things. Very interesting... 

Remin was in his quarters, in casual pants and a tank top, his hair in a ponytail, his bare feet on the table,
Wow. Just try to picture that...  Adore
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« Reply #19 on: March 28, 2009, 04:20:17 PM »

*Purrrrrr* Remin *Purrrrr*

And yes!  We're getting to know Desin better!  He's one of the only ones we almost don't know!  We don't know nearly enough abut Remin and Selorin to satisfy me, but I've been wanting to know more baout Desin for a while now.  Thanks, Matthew!!

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« Reply #20 on: March 28, 2009, 05:56:17 PM »



Remin was in his quarters, in casual pants and a tank top, his hair in a ponytail, his bare feet on the table,
Wow. Just try to picture that...  Adore


I know its quite a nice visual isn't it?  Drool
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« Reply #21 on: March 28, 2009, 10:15:33 PM »

I am very close to tears here.  I want to smack Talin in the back of the head and hug Anosanim. 

Wow, and I wanted to do the exact opposite...

I want to smack  Anosanim in the back of his head and hug  Talin

I love  Anosanim to death, but I would have to side with  Talin.   Anosanim needs to stop and think about what he is doing and realize that  Talin will ALWAYS love him and that no one will take his place and or come between them.  I am quite confused and a little shocked by  Anosanim's behaviour...

Speaking of behaviour... Orinakin was in rare form.  He's verbally throwing 'bows':  first at Heir Voe then at Talin.  I didn't know that he had that much fire in him. I was kinda turned on.

Ah, and Remin...in a tank top, pants with his hair in a ponytail...*sighs** Adore Floating Hearts Floating Hearts Floating Hearts Love Eyes...

And what's this about Ehlee wanting to experience womanhood?  Hey, that's cool, I don't have a problem with it, but I bet he wouldn't want to have the 'bitch'  visit him for 3 days out of every month bringing cramps with her.  He can trade off with me.  Give me  Desin and his penis and he could have my womanhood. I'll even wrap it up and present it to him.

...Here Ehlee, this is for you  present...
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« Reply #22 on: March 28, 2009, 10:17:25 PM »

*Purrrrrr* Remin *Purrrrr*

And yes!  We're getting to know Desin better!  He's one of the only ones we almost don't know!  We don't know nearly enough abut Remin and Selorin to satisfy me, but I've been wanting to know more baout Desin for a while now.  Thanks, Matthew!!

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Yes, I agree.  I think that we should get to know  Desin and his ass a lot more!   Adore
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« Reply #23 on: March 29, 2009, 11:08:43 AM »

YES!  More Desin!  More info on Desin's thinking!  More Desin having sex!  More Desin is always the best!

 Dancey

I love Desin!   Love

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« Reply #24 on: March 29, 2009, 01:44:37 PM »

Y'all are gonna wear poor, innocent Desin out.
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« Reply #25 on: March 29, 2009, 02:36:36 PM »

Innocent???

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I don't know about innocent but I certainly would enjoy wearing him out!

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« Reply #26 on: March 29, 2009, 05:24:07 PM »

Innocent???

 Rolling on the Floor Laughing

I don't know about innocent but I certainly would enjoy wearing him out!

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Some some  Desin for me, please!
...And  Talin's going to need a bodyguard with all these people wanting to smack him.  Maybe he needs to start training to defend himself.   Boxing
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« Reply #27 on: March 29, 2009, 08:35:03 PM »

I only wanted to smack him for about half an hour, I swear!  And I know better than to actually put my hands on a member of the Royal Family without permission.
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« Reply #28 on: March 30, 2009, 06:52:58 AM »

I only wanted to smack him for about half an hour, I swear!  And I know better than to actually put my hands on a member of the Royal Family without permission.


Oh, not you to!  Cry  Talin's our guy, remember?   Anosanim's the one that's trippin'! C'mon, we're supposed to be supporting the red guy!
 
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« Reply #29 on: March 30, 2009, 10:49:02 AM »

I do support  Talin!!  But he made  Anosanim cry!!  They're both being wayyy too stubborn.  Do they think they're  Desin?
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« Reply #30 on: March 30, 2009, 12:16:19 PM »

I do support  Talin!!  But he made  Anosanim cry!!  They're both being wayyy too stubborn.  Do they think they're  Desin?

But...he...made  Anosanim cry how?!  You know what? I say we smack them both just to be fair.  They're twins who share everything.  If  Talin gets smacked, it's only fair that  Anosanim is smacked as well.  Agreed?

...Jeeze,  Anosanim's the only one that's loosing his damn mind...
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« Reply #31 on: March 30, 2009, 03:19:42 PM »

I want to smack Talin because he's being too stubborn to realize why his brother's devastated.  Everyone's realizing it but him.  Or maybe he's just thinking that Anosanim should get over it, but that's not really fair.  He should at least talk to him, which I'm sure is something that Kudorin will speak to him about.

I do suppoirt Talin, but I think he's being a butthead right now.  I know everything will work itself out, but right now, I'm mad at Talin.  Or at least upset with the way he's treating his twin brother.

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« Reply #32 on: March 30, 2009, 04:19:42 PM »

I want to shake  Anosanim, but  Talin still deserves to be smacked simply for resorting to the "he started it" argument.
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« Reply #33 on: March 30, 2009, 05:10:19 PM »

Indeed.  I mean, that's the argument I used when I was 10 and arguing with a buddy!  Okay, so I used it a few years ago when I was arguing with my dad, but it doesn't matter!!  I'm not Anorian royalty!  Anorian Royalty should know better than to make their twin brothers cry!!!!
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« Reply #34 on: April 01, 2009, 09:31:00 AM »

In  Talin's defense I don't think he knows about  Anosanim's crying.
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« Reply #35 on: April 01, 2009, 01:29:03 PM »

Well he should know.  That's his twin brother, so he should know.

Granted, he probably hasn't realized it and when he realized what Anosanim's been going through he'll smack him first and console him later, but STILL!!

Nobody makes Anosanim cry.

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