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« on: April 03, 2009, 07:47:42 PM »

“You see,” Desin said, spreading his arms along the back of the sofa and grinning expansively, “I am a potent man with tremendous genitals.  My manhood’s overpowering.”

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« Reply #1 on: April 03, 2009, 08:52:43 PM »

Ritek needs to go. I mean, he's nice and all, and he's so good for Anosanim right now, but  Thumbs Down. Sorry y'all Ritek-fans. In my defense (  Angel ) I think it's because Anosanim's mostly with him when he's pulling away from Talin and that's breaking my heart.  Sad Stare  It's nothing personal (I think).  Cheesy

And Anosanim brought a small trunk with him...  Sad Head Shake

“He expressed regret at my leaving and concern for my trip and my safety. [...] Prince Xio Dei is oversensitive and overemotional."
Wow.  Shocked There's hope yet for the imperial family!  I really liked Kudorin's "lecture". He was being so authoritative, so passionate; he was teaching Xio Voe but as a human, not a god. I think the next step for Xio Voe would be to realize he can learn about these things from Kudorin and from other people as well, and that it's something valuable. Hopefully his affection for Kudorin will extend to others.

Imagine what it would be like if your older brother were a seemingly perfect human being.
This made me think... in the Jacacean mindset, Xio Voe is probably as "perfect" as Anosukinom is for Anorians...  Thinking Especially if Jacaceans view emotions as a weakness.

Desin and Norisa are so cute together!  Red Love I love how Ehlee is as direct as Desin. No wonder they get along so well sexually.  Wink

You know, Xio Voe has been "criticized" for having no emotions, but I love how open and sincere he is when he *does* feel something... like with Kudorin. He doesn't get it, yet he accepts and welcomes it. “The other reason I’m drawn to you is an irrational mystery.”Maybe it’s madness.”  [...]  “Maybe it’s weakness.  Maybe it’s treason.  Maybe someday I’ll regret it all.”  Adore

Great chapter Matthew! And early too!  Happy Dance

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« Reply #2 on: April 03, 2009, 09:41:35 PM »

I LOVED this chapter! 

All of Desin's scenes were amazing, and funny, and sometimes even sweet.

Also, I really like Ritek, because it's not just Anosanim who has to get used to Talin being married, Talin eventually also has to get used to the way Anosanim is when he has a boyfriend--and I don't ever recall a point where a serious boyfriend was mentioned in his past.  Even if he had boyfriends when he was younger, he's ascended now, and his time is precious.  Anosanim has to learn to deal with the time constraint that that puts on all of his relationships, especially one with a boyfriend (which he's never had before), and Talin has to learn to deal along with him.  He'll eventually be able to juggle all of his relationships well, but right now, because he's never had a boyfriend as the royal architect (as opposed to the less busy royal architect's apprentice), he's going to make some mistakes and possibly neglect the people in his life for a while.  He'll learn to do better, he just needs some time.

It's like people who've just gotten together with someone (especially someone serious, for the first time)--for a while, to their other friends and family, they're gonna be kind of absent in the beginning.  It's the excitement and joy of embarking on a new relationship with someone you really like, about establishing a firm relationship with this wonderful new person.  It calms down eventually and life gets more balanced, returns closer to its normal state.  It's not Ritek himself, it's his role.  Whoever Anosanim was with, his having a boyfriend would have had consequences (though not to the extreme extent of what's happening now, certainly; I don't want to imply that). 

It's just unfortunate that it's happening right now, when Anosanim is dealing with Talin making such a personal and permanent change in his life.  But I think, no matter what, Anosanim having a boyfriend would have taken him away from the palace.  The present situation is just heavily exacerbating what would have happened, in some form or another anyway, with any boyfriend that Anosanim had.  It's not all about him running away to Ritek so he can avoid dealing with Talin (I agree, though, he's doing that).  But even if things were normal, he'd still be gone more often (though I don't believe as much as he has been, what with his deliberately avoiding interrupting Talin and Hitari and inadvertently just avoiding Talin altogether).

Still, it would be unfair to tell Anosanim that he can't have a boyfriend, can't have anyone to run to if he's fighting with Talin, just so that his and Talin's relationship remains exactly the same.  Why?  Because it's not necessarily the presence of a boyfriend--I think he's doing a really effective job of pushing Talin away on his own, and Talin is "playing along" and actually helping him.  If he didn't run to Ritek, he probably would have run somewhere else, and he's Talin's twin--if he wanted to avoid Talin to "give him more independence," he could do it.  He would obviously know that Talin would figure out all of the usual spots, so I'm sure he'd be fully capable of finding a suitable alternative to Ritek if Ritek didn't exist.  Hell, he could go visit one of his thousand-and-one cousins and not tell anyone where he was going except the guards he took with him.

Also, this--Oh, Ritek, “I’m so glad, immeasurably glad, that we kept trying.  That we didn’t give up on each other” --made me bust up laughing.  Nice, Anosanim, nice.  We kept trying, did we?  Where'd the part Talin played in this go?  Nice that he's keeping the credit all to himself and Ritek.  Hahahahaha.

But anyway, I loved Xio Voe and Kudorin's scenes the most. 

What the Jacacean imperial family is doing to their 3 youngest children is heartbreaking.  What Xio Sei and Xio Heijein did to Xio Voe is heartbreaking--but Xio Voe, at least, had the strength and will to do well despite what happened.  His siblings?  Probably not as well.  After all, Xio Voe is one of a kind.  I'm sure his siblings are having a harder time.  It's so sad.  Poor Xio Dei, especially.  12 years old and told that worrying for your idolized older brother is basically a waste of time, from that very brother?  Being talked to that way by your parents pretty much all of the time?  God, the poor kid needs a hug.  And a vacation in the Anorian royal palace.  Really, all 3 of them do. 

And the last scene with Xio Voe and Kudorin, the darkness turning into light, the tiny butterfly...  ::dies::  I absolutely adored it.  But most of all, I loved Xio Voe describing why he liked Kudorin, his feelings of wanting to look out for Kudorin, how he finds him "endearing and vulnerable" and "such a charming cialex," how he realizes that Kudorin really is "a cheerful, simple person."  ::melts into a puddle of goo::  Floating Hearts Floating Hearts Floating Hearts  I found that so wonderful and sweet and beautiful.  And Kudorin was so happy.  ::happy sigh::

Wow, I'm gonna go back to re-read now.

- Jae


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« Reply #3 on: April 03, 2009, 09:50:44 PM »

I don't agree with Falconer about Ritek.  He's TRYING to fix things, its not his fault those two are being stubborn.  I think this is proof that he's the right one for Anosanim.     OMGGGGGGG   Xio Voe got YELLED at!!
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« Reply #4 on: April 03, 2009, 09:54:44 PM »

I don't agree with Falconer about Ritek.  He's TRYING to fix things  

Yes, I agree with you, that's a very good point.  Ritek is actually keeping Anosanim more emotionally stable and level-headed about what's happening, and also encouraged him a couple of chapters ago (and in this one, too), that close friends can stay as close as they always have even if there are other people.  I just think that Anosanim didn't completely listen to him, because he's been swamped under by all of his own uncertainties and insecurities, and so he can't hear or absorb everything that Ritek is saying.  Ritek's been very wise and supportive.

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« Reply #5 on: April 03, 2009, 11:29:47 PM »

Oh.

My.

God.


The end of this chapter nearly killed me. Xio Voe and emotions are so, so... *flails*

Also:

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            “What does grous meive mean?” Vade asked.

            “He was talking about Bade, I believe,” Selorin said.

            “Hmm?” Bade asked, looking up from the letter from the Imperial Jacacean Scientific Society.

            “But what does it mean?” Vade asked.  “New husband?”

            Orinakin turned his back to Bade and lowered his voice with a smile.  “Curly-haired shepherd.”

Bwahahahahahahahahahaha...
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« Reply #6 on: April 04, 2009, 04:11:23 AM »

Yay!  Part 130!!!

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“Curly-haired shepherd.”

Now why would he be thinking about Bade while having sex with Desin?  Did I miss something?

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The two of you have been too close too long for him to let go now.

Thank you!!!!!  I told you that Hitari was making more sense than anyone at the moment!!

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The Wanderer would turn his back on the Maiden forever before he and Anosanim would let go of each other.

Hmph.  Glad he's not gone off the deep end.  Now all he has to do is talk to his brother.  Poor Anosanim... Of course Talin wants a little independence, it's normal, but it doesn't mean he's never going to speak to you again!  You'll always be twins, no matter what happens in either of your lives!!!

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“I’m not in the throes of abysmal depression,” Anosukinom said, as if he’d suggested anything of the sort.

Only Kudorin...

Okay, explain me this... would Xio Voe not be upset if one of his family members were really sad?  Wait, don't answer that.  Xio Voe still has no emotions.

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“But when they’re unhappy, you don’t care?”

            No, he didn’t.  “Their emotions are theirs to manage, not mine.”

Ugh!!!  *smacks him*  I don't have siblings but when someone I care about is upset I tend to be devastated!  Granted, I'm a cialex, and an overemotional one at that, but can't he just... can't anyone fix him?!

Well, either Matthew read my mind or I read Matthew's... Anosukinom is angry!  Yay!!!

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Xio Voe studied the fire that had suddenly erupted in the center of the table.

Yikes... remind me to never anger him.  Never.  Ever.  Okay?  Okay.

Sexy, though!!!!  Adore Adore Adore

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“I do not place upon all older siblings the responsibility of the welfare of younger siblings.  But, as you are significantly older than yours, and since you are even now grooming them for their roles in your government, it is your responsibility to be a good influence, a good mentor, and a good role model.  You have failed in that responsibility, Xio Voe, failed very badly.”

I have the distinct feeling that Xio Voe will not welcome that.  But it's true!  How do you teach someone without loving them??

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You didn’t take the time.  You didn’t bother.  You treat them not as individuals, not as family, not as unique people with their own tastes, desires, interests, and minds.  You treat them as your parents treated you, as titles, as roles, as miniature versions of the adults they’ll eventually grow up to be.  But they’re not there yet!

And now, for some reason, I'm thinking of Aragorn.  Don't ask me why, I just am.

I still have no idea how he's 'exempt' from showing emotions... I don't think I'd be able to live that way.  My life would have no meaning, no depth, nothing.

And whoa... it's been a very very *very* long time since I encountered a word and honestly had to think about what it meant.  Good on you, Matthew!!

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Orinakin finds you the most horrific being he’s encountered in his life because of it.

Eeep!!  Okay, so maybe Xio Voe was aware of it, but I hope he doesn't use it against him.

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I have no time to coddle and comfort my generals.

*smacks him again*  I swear I'm going to turn him black and blue if he keeps this up!!  Of *course* one should cry at the thought of dead bodies!  If it happens once, or even twice, then it can be reigned in next time, at least when he's in public!!!

Xio Voe wouldn't shed a tear at his mother's funeral, would he?  Wow, I won't even continue this train of thought.   Angry

Did Anosukinom just call Xio Voe a cialex or did I completely imagine that???

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who could really look suave beside Remin?

It's Remin.  Competing with him is senseless.   Red Love

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I’ve been hasty.

Liz and Sue probably know I'm going to say this... but a nmovie quote comes to mind: "Don't be hasty, Master Merry!".  Being hasty, as Anosanim is figuring out now, can lead to a lot of painful things being done and said.  Silly silly Anosanim  Red Heart.

Of course you're not losing Talin for good, you foolish foolish boy!  Sometimes it's hard to forget just how young they all are.

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Maybe he’d get laid if Norisa took a nap.

 Rolling on the Floor Laughing Rolling on the Floor Laughing Rolling on the Floor Laughing Rolling on the Floor Laughing Rolling on the Floor Laughing Rolling on the Floor Laughing  How did he not realize that his beloved tiger would take Ehlee's time away from him?

Never mind.

 Rolling on the Floor Laughing Rolling on the Floor Laughing Rolling on the Floor Laughing Rolling on the Floor Laughing Rolling on the Floor Laughing Rolling on the Floor Laughing!!!!!!!!!!  HA!!!!!!!

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“Mouth shoon.”

HA!!!!!!!  I tried not to laugh, but that didn't work out.

Whoa... first we were all thinking that Anosanim would break up with Ritek because Ritek said The Thre Words... and now they're thinking about keeping some of their things at each other's houses?  Okay, okay, I'm all for moving fast, but I keep remembering Desin's threat about what would happen if Anosanim were to choose Ritek.

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“I’m so glad, immeasurably glad, that we kept trying.  That we didn’t give up on each other.”

Lizzz!  I'm now thinking of 'Twilight'!!!!!  Sorry, sorry!  I can't keep my mind from conjuring images of something else while I read!

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The Anorian criminal code had no physical penalties, no death, no corporal punishment.

I like that.  But I do believe that sometimes, corporal punishment, if not the death penalty, should be applied.  I'll keep the rest of my thoughts private, at least on this subject.  It is true, however, that I don't see Anorians as people who would deserve such punishment.  Not for the most part anyway.

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He had Anosukinom’s knowledge but a man’s limitations, and it haunted him, how evil could move so smoothly through the land, how people could do such atrocious things to each other.

Never tell him about the Holocaust.  He wouldn't be able to handle it.  Sad  Or he would, but it'd hurt him more than almost anything else in the world... But one does need to be empathic in order to rule well.

*gasp* Xio Voe is lying.  To Anosukinom.

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Shis Piek’s reign of terror was more infamous than even he’d imagined it would be.

That sounds familiar.

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“feared him.  They did not love him.  They did not respect him.  They did not admire him.  There was nothing admirable, nothing honorable, in his actions.  He conquered, yes.  He ruled.  But how great was his reign, if those he ruled over would rather have done without him?  He left Morrain a larger territory than he’d found it, but it was in no way better.  It took generations to recover and rebuild.”

I'm going to have to go to Wiki for more dtails on that.  As soon as such details are available, that is.  Because that sounds like the kind of thing I would study.

But I digress.

I respect Xio Voe's desire to invade a nation without shedding blood.  Invading a nation isn't something I condone at all, but if it happens, better to do it without killing.

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“My greatness will be evident in how Jacacea improves under my reign,”

Cocky, ain't he?

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I find you stimulating, challenging, exciting, frustrating, surprising, charming, and irresistibly appealing even at times when I want to grab you with both hands and shake some logic into you.

And the rest of us want to shake some *emotions* into you.  *Any* emotions!!!!  Smiley

*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE*

Xio Voe showed an emotion!!!

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and a weak shaft of light spilled into the blackness of night.  He felt it, a minute fluttering, like the wings of a new moth disturbing the silence of a mine.  It was soft, and tender, and small, but real, and rich with meaning.

*pounces*

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“Maybe it’s madness.”  Xio Voe’s voice was as cool as ever, and when Kudorin opened his eyes, Xio Voe’s expression was thoughtful, Xio Voe’s hand hovering only an inch from his cheek, as if about to caress him.  “Maybe it’s weakness.  Maybe it’s treason.  Maybe someday I’ll regret it all.”  Xio Voe’s fingers curled and uncurled, and his expression shifted.  Softened.  His voice dropped a full octave, becoming hushed as a small, tender smile tugged at his lips, rising into his eyes.  “But I do believe that, in a world full of people, you are my favorite.”

  Happy Hands Dancing Dancey Bouncy Party! Dancing Dancey Bouncy Party! Dancing Dancey Bouncy Party! Happy Hands

*tear tear*!!!!!!!

Matthew!!  Thank you!!
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« Reply #7 on: April 04, 2009, 04:13:33 AM »

You've got a very good point, Jae, about everybody having to adjust to Anosanim having a boyfriend, and accept that he'll be spending time with him. And I agree.

I concede that Ritek is very good for Anosanim right now (as I said in my first post). I wasn't making a point or an argument. I don't like Ritek (you know, the person), but it's just an opinion, purely subjective (I think!).  Cheesy I'm sure a lot of readers like him! For various reasons. I just happen not to. *shrugs*

It's amazing isn't it? How one can like/not like a character regardless of whether he's "good" or not in the story... Shows just how real and 3-D they are. Some people just don't click with others in real life, and that's what's going on for me with Ritek I think.  Peace

Edit: I keep saying "I think", and it's because I don't believe it's 100% subjective. I think for the twins, their significant other needs to *click* with the other twin. Because they're so close, if the boyfriend doesn't get along/hang out/click with the twin, the relationship is missing something. Just like Bade/Orinakin/Selorin (you could even add Vade in there). Just like Hitari/Talin/Anosanim. When you've got that boyfriends/twins closeness, time management and discriminating between whom to spend time with, that feeling of pulling away, of detachment (that Talin and Anosanim are feeling right now) would not be there. Remember the conversation between Talin and Hitari, how Hitari was saying that he didn't want to get between them... but he wouldn't, because he's so close to Anosanim. But with Ritek, you don't have that. Even when they spent time in the villa, Ritek didn't hang out with Hitari and Talin.  Hmmm He's kept "separate" from them, and that bothers me. Perhaps it's Anosanim's doing, I dunno. But the fact remains that there's no relationship at all between Talin and Ritek... that's why I don't think it's gonna work.

Also, Talin and Anosanim are even closer than Selorin and Orinakin are. Selorin and Orinakin have experience with being away from each other for extended periods of time. Talin and Anosanim don't have that. That's why you need even more of a bond for Talin/Anosanim and their significant other. That's why Anosanim was always so "into" Talin's relationships, so close to the boyfriends. With Ritek, you don't have that (yet?).

There! I think I might actually have a point...  Grin
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« Reply #8 on: April 04, 2009, 08:16:00 AM »

Iaroo - Ehlee said that he thought Orinakin would be the one to let him experience his femininity until  Orinakin found his grous mieve.  And don't be dragging me into your Twilight thoughts, because that would involve a het couple and you KNOW how I feel about  most of them.
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« Reply #9 on: April 04, 2009, 10:08:39 AM »

That is trueeeee!  I'd forgotten about that!  Thanks for the reminder!

And Twilight is hotness.

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« Reply #10 on: April 04, 2009, 02:55:55 PM »


I concede that Ritek is very good for Anosanim right now (as I said in my first post). I wasn't making a point or an argument. I don't like Ritek (you know, the person), but it's just an opinion, purely subjective (I think!).  Cheesy I'm sure a lot of readers like him! For various reasons. I just happen not to. *shrugs*


I can understand what your saying. I like Ritek I think he has been very understanding, patient, supportive, kind and sweet to  Anosanim and has helped him alot im real impressed with him but I to have just a small piece of myself that just doesn't click YET with him.  I say YET because I just keep telling myself I need to get to know him better I really don't know him that well yet.  Plus I keep telling myself that he can't be to bad if it was  Talin who invited him to Satatunin to spend time with  Anosanim. But the whole "clicking" thing, I agree.
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« Reply #11 on: April 04, 2009, 03:06:37 PM »

He's TRYING to fix things, its not his fault those two are being stubborn.

I agree I don't blame this on either twin I think there both at fault and being stubborn, as close as the two of them are and know each other better then anyone they both should no better.... Sad Head Shake

But I think it was a good idea for Talin to wait to talk to  Anosanim because he seemed very mad when he burst into  Anosanim apartment and that probably would have caused more trouble. Wink
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« Reply #12 on: April 04, 2009, 05:26:13 PM »

But the whole "clicking" thing, I agree.
Glad I'm not alone on this!  Wink
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Anosanim brought a small trunk with him

Anosanim will not be caught without necessary supplies ever again.  Do not seek to separate the man from his make-up!

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in the Jacacean mindset, Xio Voe is probably as "perfect" as Anosukinom is for Anorians

Absolutely.

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Desin and Norisa are so cute together!

Desin took a back seat to his own tiger.  Alas.

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You know, Xio Voe has been "criticized" for having no emotions, but I love how open and sincere he is when he *does* feel something... like with Kudorin.

I really admire his honesty.  I'd almost expect him to deny that he ever feels anything, but when he does feel something, he owns up to it.  He's direct, he has integrity, and he's very open with Kudorin.  ("Very" being relative; this is Xio Voe.)

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Great chapter Matthew!

Thank you!

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I LOVED this chapter!

 Cheesy

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I think, no matter what, Anosanim having a boyfriend would have taken him away from the palace.  The present situation is just heavily exacerbating what would have happened, in some form or another anyway, with any boyfriend that Anosanim had.  It's not all about him running away to Ritek so he can avoid dealing with Talin (I agree, though, he's doing that).  But even if things were normal, he'd still be gone more often (though I don't believe as much as he has been, what with his deliberately avoiding interrupting Talin and Hitari and inadvertently just avoiding Talin altogether).

I do think that a lot of the reason he's at Ritek's place so much is that he wants to leave the palace specifically to avoid Talin.  Under other/normal circumstances I can see Anosanim and Ritek going out for a date and then returning to the palace, or I can see Ritek coming to see Anosanim at the palace instead of Anosanim going to see Ritek.  So Ritek would take up Anosanim's time, but Anosanim would still have plenty of time at home, available to Talin.  Right now, Anosanim just seems to want to get away from Talin.

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it's not necessarily the presence of a boyfriend--I think he's doing a really effective job of pushing Talin away on his own, and Talin is "playing along" and actually helping him.  If he didn't run to Ritek, he probably would have run somewhere else

I see this, too.

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Which I really want to name.  Something like The Butterfly of Feelings.

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« Reply #15 on: April 04, 2009, 06:41:31 PM »

On the subject of Ritek:

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He's TRYING to fix things, its not his fault those two are being stubborn.

Ritek genuinely seems to want to help Anosanim.  With anything, really, but he knows how important Talin is to Anosanim (really, I think that the entire country got that memo), and he sees how miserable Anosanim is, and he wants Anosanim to be happy, so he's offering whatever advice he can come up with.

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OMGGGGGGG   Xio Voe got YELLED at!!

Is that even legal?

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would Xio Voe not be upset if one of his family members were really sad?

Apparently not.  I guess that makes his life easier, overall.

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it's been a very very *very* long time since I encountered a word and honestly had to think about what it meant.

There've been times over the years that I've used a word that my adviser has recommended that I change.  I usually resist, and we go back and forth over it, and she makes a good point, and I relent.  It's best, my adviser and I agree, for readers to roll along smoothly with the text, and not have to stop and consult a dictionary.  (I don't bring that up as a comment on my vocabulary or yours; it's just something that happens occasionally.)

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Did Anosukinom just call Xio Voe a cialex or did I completely imagine that???

And Xio Voe let him.   Shocked

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Sometimes it's hard to forget just how young they all are.

I know.  This line from ITL 34 always makes me reconsider:

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As the pharaoh’s birthday approached, the city and the palace filled with visitors hoping to attend the celebration.  “After all,” someone was overheard to say, “it isn’t every day that the most powerful man in the world turns twenty-four.”

Anosanim and Talin are only twenty.  Now, when I was younger, sure, being twenty meant you were an adult.  Now that I've met twenty and moved on, I'm like, man, I'm glad that no one put me in charge of a country's well-being at that age.

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*gasp* Xio Voe is lying.  To Anosukinom.

Kudorin took that really well in stride, though.  I was kind of surprised that he didn't comment on it.

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Cocky, ain't he?

That's our boy.

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« Reply #17 on: April 04, 2009, 07:02:57 PM »

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I think for the twins, their significant other needs to *click* with the other twin. Because they're so close, if the boyfriend doesn't get along/hang out/click with the twin, the relationship is missing something.

He's kept "separate" from them, and that bothers me. Perhaps it's Anosanim's doing, I dunno. But the fact remains that there's no relationship at all between Talin and Ritek... that's why I don't think it's gonna work.

That's why Anosanim was always so "into" Talin's relationships, so close to the boyfriends. With Ritek, you don't have that (yet?).

Hmm.  What's with all of these nails?  How strange.  It looks like Falconer's hit them all on the head.

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« Reply #18 on: April 04, 2009, 07:05:46 PM »

But I think it was a good idea for Talin to wait to talk to  Anosanim because he seemed very mad when he burst into  Anosanim apartment and that probably would have caused more trouble.

I'm disappointed that we missed out on a good angry Talin scene.  And it makes me wonder if Anosanim would've been upset or yelled back or what.

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« Reply #19 on: April 04, 2009, 07:07:30 PM »

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The end of this chapter nearly killed me. Xio Voe and emotions are so, so... *flails*

Kudorin reacted with sunshine and butterflies.  Dude.  CIALEX.

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« Reply #20 on: April 04, 2009, 07:14:22 PM »

But I think it was a good idea for Talin to wait to talk to  Anosanim because he seemed very mad when he burst into  Anosanim apartment and that probably would have caused more trouble.

I'm disappointed that we missed out on a good angry Talin scene.  And it makes me wonder if Anosanim would've been upset or yelled back or what.

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Well as stubborn as these two are my guess would be he would yell back... Cheesy  Then probably cry when Talin left.  Scared  Just my guess.. Tongue
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« Reply #21 on: April 04, 2009, 10:46:03 PM »

1. The Butterfly - I herebye vote we call it the Wings of Love, just to be schmaltzy. 

2.  In Jacacea it probably is illegal to yell at Xio Voe, but just how do they propose to punish a God for it?

3.  Twins clicking - what goes for one set of twins goes for the other set right?  More points in Selorin & Vade's favor.
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« Reply #22 on: April 04, 2009, 11:42:09 PM »


3.  Twins clicking - what goes for one set of twins goes for the other set right?  More points in Selorin & Vade's favor.


Like I said I agree with the clicking  Giggle
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« Reply #23 on: April 06, 2009, 10:54:41 AM »

Team Selorin/Vade!  I told you it would work!!

Illegal to yell at Xio Voe... maybe... but Anosukinom is a god... rules don't necessarily apply to him, do they?

As for Ritek, it's true that I don't think he's the one, and I'm not sure I *want* him to be the one.  He doesn't click with me, and I'm sorry, but if someone's gonna be with Anosanim, he's gotta click with me and that's all there is to it.

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« Reply #24 on: April 06, 2009, 12:57:51 PM »

Team As for Ritek, it's true that I don't think he's the one, and I'm not sure I *want* him to be the one.  He doesn't click with me, and I'm sorry, but if someone's gonna be with Anosanim, he's gotta click with me and that's all there is to it.

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« Reply #25 on: April 06, 2009, 01:36:51 PM »

Well, he does.
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« Reply #26 on: April 08, 2009, 06:15:07 PM »

 Dancey What an amazing chapter!  I feel like my heart's gonna burst in every scene with Xio Voe and Kudorin.  I want to give lots of hugs to Xio Dei.  I can't stop  Rolling on the Floor Laughing with Desin's scenes and even Norissa got some TLC!

I have to say that I'm one of the people that is not a fan of Ritek.   Dunno I think it's because I still don't know him well enough.  He's very supportive and I'm glad he's there for Anosanim but I don't think think he's good enough for Anosanim.  Another reason why I'm probably not pro-Ritek is because out of all the siblings and spouses and boyfriends and Vade, even Norissa, he's the least interesting character for me.  Bag over your head But that's just me. I just have to see how he develops.



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« Reply #27 on: April 08, 2009, 08:34:57 PM »

Another reason why I'm probably not pro-Ritek is because out of all the siblings and spouses and boyfriends and Vade, even Norissa, he's the least interesting character for me. 


I've got a great deal of respect for Norisa! She holds her own among this amazing cast.  Rock Out!
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« Reply #28 on: April 09, 2009, 04:38:06 PM »

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I've got a great deal of respect for Norisa! She holds her own among this amazing cast.  Rock Out!

Sometimes, she likes to "steal the show."  I love Norisa!
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« Reply #29 on: April 10, 2009, 12:04:53 PM »

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