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« on: December 03, 2009, 10:59:15 AM »

With the mods and MHT's Approval, I am starting thread for each of the chapters so people can remain spoiler free if they wish!

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  “The pharaoh,” Bade said.

            “Of Orina Anoris,” Vade said.

            A few minutes passed in baffled silence.

            “The pharaoh,” Vade said.

            “Of Orina Anoris,” Bade said.

            A bug crawled across the granite step beneath their feet, taking its time in traveling behind Vade’s boots.

            In search of a reassuring point, Bade offered, “He’s very wealthy.”

            “And very powerful,” Vade said somewhat dubiously, not sounding comforted at all.

            “Immensely powerful,” Bade agreed.  He wanted to consider that to be a good thing, a selling point, but in his gut, it made him uneasy.  Nosupolis was small and rather poor, all things considered, while Orina Anoris was the oldest, wealthiest, most powerful nation in the world.  Bade would only reach the throne if his older brother, Tiko, met with an unfortunate and sudden end, while Anosukinom, the pharaoh of Orina Anoris, was the most powerful man alive.

            “Especially if he really can raise the sun,” Vade said.

            “That can’t possibly be true.”  Everyone knew that only a god could move the sun.

            “To them, it’s reality,” Vade argued.  “Do you want to live in a country where all of the citizens believe that their pharaoh makes the sun rise and set?  They believe that their pharaoh is a god, that their pharaoh’s siblings are children of gods, that-”

            “People here believe that stepping on three spiders before midnight is good luck,” Bade said.  “All it’s ever given me is a mess to clean up.”

            “They think that he sets fires with his mind and breathes underwater,” Vade continued, ignoring his comments.  “They say that when he cries, it rains.”

            “He’s powerful, wealthy, and beloved,” Bade said.  He might as well defend the pharaoh now; he had to get used to the idea.  Besides, Vade was only bringing up Orina Anoris’s eccentricities to be irritating; normally, they both found what they knew of that country to be fascinating, if mysterious.  “I imagine that he’s intelligent and well-educated.  His brother is charming and very handsome.”

            “Prince Orinakin?” Vade asked.  “He has purple hair.  Purple hair, Bade, he has purple hair.  And purple eyes.  Have you ever seen anyone with purple hair?  Have you ever heard of anyone having purple hair?”

            No, but it was a captivating sight.
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« Reply #1 on: December 03, 2009, 11:41:24 AM »

I love the opening to this saga. Bade and Vade continue to be two of my favorite characters, even over 160 chapters later.  Love 
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« Reply #2 on: January 09, 2010, 10:42:14 PM »

I have started at the beginning... again. Blush  What I love about the start of the story and as Matthew pointed out, that by having Bade come from a culture that wasn't intimately familiar with Orinia Anoris I learned right along with Bade.  Bade asked all my questions for me.   Orinikin, in answering them allows me still to familiarize myself with Anorian culture and history.  I love the character traits that Matthew instilled in Bade.  His honesty, intergrity, ethicalness and openess had me falling in love with him right from the beginning.

The discussions between Rini and Selorin and Rini and Remin really helped me flesh out Orinakin's role.  Having Orinakin being homesick and thinking about his home and missing his family helped me to see how important they were to him.  Having Rini go around and tell them all that Orinikin was coming home allowed me to get a basic understanding of each of the brothers personalities.  Desin plays with Rini exactly the same in Chapter 1 as he does in Chapter 170.  I  may get to know them better as the story unfolds but with a few words and scenes in Chapter 1 Matthew outlines the basic aspects of each of the brothers personalities that is their bedrock and they do not deviate from this groundwork.  I can trust that these people that I meet in Chapter 1 remain the same intrinsically throughout the story and that is all good.

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« Reply #3 on: January 10, 2010, 06:14:10 AM »

I remember getting introduced to ITL because of Matthew's "Guys in College" and thinking...hmmn, this is very different but very interesting.  I was intrigued enough to start a Paypal account just so I could subscribe.  My point is, yeah, it's an amazing intro to ITL.  Smiley
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« Reply #4 on: March 24, 2010, 09:35:55 PM »

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“I’m not very schooled in charm and flattery,” Bade said.  “I wish that I were, but it’s not one of my strengths.”

            “Dillane adores that about you, and I must admit that I do, too.  I would like to have someone as well-intentioned and candid as you at some of my meetings and dinners.  It would be a nice change for everyone there.”

            “Thank you,” Bade said.  He’d never guessed that he was well-suited for international relations.
...brings one word to the forefront of my mind: foreshadowing.  Cheesy
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« Reply #5 on: March 25, 2010, 11:07:31 AM »

Ahhhhhhh... yes the beginning.  Floating Hearts Cute Hug
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