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« on: December 03, 2009, 11:25:34 AM »

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Smiling, he found what he wanted.  Anosanim would be thrilled to see him in it.  That would also mean that Anosanim would insist on jewelry and some elaborate hairstyle, but he felt generous enough today to give in on a few points.

            “There’s someone else,” Etaki said.  “Whose bed did you really leave mine for, Talin?  You’d never think of wearing that if you weren’t trying to impress someone.”

            He laughed.  “I don’t have to impress anyone,” Talin said, turning to face Etaki.  “I was born a child of the gods, seventh-born in a dynasty of seven.  I am brother of the god among us.  I create beauty.”  He raised his hand, not to strike, but to show the mark on the back of his hand, the color of blood, the color of passion.  “I need impress no one, Lo Etaki, least of all you.  Now leave my presence and do not return, or I shall have the guards escort you from the home of Anosukinom and bar you from it forever.”

            Shaken, Etaki stepped back.  “You don’t mean that,” he said, but his voice was the whine of a coward.

            Talin laughed, lowering his hand.  “You were fool enough to use me, and you were fool enough to betray me.  If the gods are with you, you will not be fool enough to doubt me now.”

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          Their parents were traveling, now, but surely they’d be home at some point.  What if they didn’t like him?  How much weight would their opinion hold?  Kudorin’s mother wasn’t simply a mother, she was a former pharaoh, a former god, and he wondered why the assistant was coming over to Rini.

            He realized that the assistant was coming over to him.  “Your Highness,” she said, with a polite bow, “His Royal Highness, Prince Orinakin, has asked me to inform you that if you will please do him the courtesy of thinking very quietly for the duration of this evening, dinner included, he will be more than happy to speak with you once dinner has ended.”

            “Are you thinking too loudly and distracting him?” Rini whispered, grinning.  “This is great.  Think really hard about something that he hates, like mushrooms.”

            “Mushrooms?” Bade whispered.  Why would Orinakin hate mushrooms?  What negative feelings could anyone harbor toward mushrooms?

            “He can’t stand them,” Rini said.  “Think harder, I might have just seen his eyebrow twitch.”
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« Reply #1 on: December 04, 2009, 10:37:19 AM »

I love how Talin takes charge and just leaves him.  I love even more how Anosanim tells him off.  Way to stand up for your brother!!!!!

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« Reply #2 on: January 25, 2010, 02:22:03 AM »

OK so there was a lot happening iin this chapter BUT for me this chapter was all about dresses/skirts and  Giggle underwear, red and skimpy or the potential lack there of.  Sometimes I have a juvenille mindset.  Just sometimes. Wink  I am quite disappointed we didn't get to see Remin in one Sad .

I have read a couple of times since I first read this chapter.  Now that we are at past the chapter this segment gives me the chills when I read it.

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            “You will find your happiness,” Kudorin said.  “But not with Etaki.  And not until you strip yourself of the damage that Hitari has inflicted.”

            The words came without permission.  “He’s a poison,” Talin said.  “A poison that I desperately want to drink.”

            “Then drink him,” Kudorin said, looking into his eyes.  “Drink your fill.  When it is time, when you have taken too much, you will find that you cannot tolerate another drop.  And then you shall be rid of him, forever..."

 Clap  Thumbs Up Go Anosanim! Go TALIN! Happy Hands He kicks that lying cheating using skumbag Etaki to the curb.  However I was quite disturbed by Rini and Selorin's comments about Htari and the type of man he is.  I really didn't know if I wanted to meet him.  Sad Head Shake

I understand and like T'rin now, but back here, the first time I read this chapter I didn't like him at all.  When he verbally undermined Bade I was ready to defend Bade with a knife.  Then to have Bade sitting in the public courtyard to avoid running in T'rin again just made me Heartbroken .  Thank goodness for Orinakin and The Dress and Bades reaction... underwear and if so what kind or none  Drool .  Though later in the chapter I don't think the second dress was much better with Bades reaction.  Then Seeing Desin, Rini, Kudorin, Anosanim and finally Talin.   Poor lamb.  So many gorgeous temptations.

I don't blame Bade for going along with Rini and thinking hard about mushrooms.  Giggle
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« Reply #3 on: March 13, 2010, 01:05:03 PM »

MUSHROOMS!!

Oh my God... oh Now I have a banner idea!!  *CACKLE*

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« Reply #4 on: March 15, 2010, 09:15:44 AM »

 Giggle

You know we never did find out about Orinakins underwear....did he or didn't he?...if so what kind?...snug boxer, briefs or thong? Thinking

And yeah seeing Remin in a dress would have been  Drool
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« Reply #5 on: March 15, 2010, 09:42:56 AM »

You know, Remin probably wore a lot of dresses. Easy access and all that.  Giggle

I wonder if Selorin hates mushrooms, too. Taste in foods seems like it would be something he and Orinakin would hve in common. Well, they hve everything in common. You know what I mean.

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« Reply #6 on: March 15, 2010, 10:20:21 AM »

Yep mutual admiration of blonde Nosupolin Princes...
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« Reply #7 on: March 15, 2010, 10:22:12 AM »

*snickers*

Still waiting for Selorin & Vade to hook up....
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