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« on: December 29, 2009, 10:46:58 AM »

*watches Ankira put on  Boxing gloves*  I love how during this part of the story all the Siblings, Ankira and Bade are protective of Kudorin.  How, with each of their reactions shows us aout who each one of them is and how they relate to challenges.  Especially Desin and his desire to rip a new one in Xoe Voe, physically.  I also like how, in this exchange Remin keeps his sense of humour.

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            “He mentioned more than once that you’d be welcome in Jacacea.”  Kudorin seemed younger to her now than any time since his ascension.  There was a vulnerability to him that broke her heart.

            “Well, that’s certainly very generous of him.”  Someday, several years from now, she’d look back on all of this and laugh.  At the moment, she saw nothing funny in any of it.  “Remind me to thank him in the morning.  And who, exactly, will rule Orina Anoris?”

            “Traditionally,” Kudorin said, “when the eldest is childless and abdicates, the throne falls to the second son.”

            Remin nodded sagely.  “I would make an excellent pharaoh.”

            Kudorin looked up at him, pulling out a smile from somewhere inside.  “I’ve always thought so.”

            Watching Kudorin smile at Remin with the fond love he always lavished on his brothers, Anikira wanted to scream with frustration.  For the smartest person alive, Xio Voe was really fucking stupid.  How could he not see that Kudorin was worthy of so much more than he was offering?  A secondary throne, the seat of a spouse, was nothing to Kudorin.  Anyone who could raise the sun, call a storm with a thought, and do literally anything and everything else, didn’t need a title or a fancy seat.  What Kudorin wanted was to be loved and understood; what Kudorin wanted was someone to adore.  He wanted romance, affection, love, support, sex, wanted the kind of grand and wonderful relationship that only the strongest of couples knew.  And Kudorin deserved nothing less than to have his every hope and dream fulfilled.
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« Reply #1 on: December 29, 2009, 10:57:56 AM »

*watches the tiny bud slowly start to unfurl*

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             "Surely even you,” he added, “will concede that I am not an imbecile.”

            The royal farmer’s face twisted into an angry sneer.  “I don’t know.  Anyone who causes the pharaoh to make it rain must’ve done something pretty fucking stupid.”

            Causes the pharaoh to make it rain.

            “Why are you crying?”

            He’d made the pharaoh make it rain.

            A rare enough occurrence to have roused the royal farmer’s protective instincts.  And for protective instincts to have been roused, the pharaoh must seem vulnerable.  To him.

            It was a victory, an advantage to be exploited.  Yet the accompanying sense of momentum didn’t arise.  Instead, he…felt.  Something.

            Something unwelcome.

            He’d made the pharaoh cry.  He didn’t like that.  He’d known that he’d done it - - he’d seen the tears, simply tears at first, then beginning to streak in pale colors - - but it hadn’t meant anything.  He’d accepted the pharaoh’s reply on the matter; he’d been distracted by his own agenda.

            But he’d made the pharaoh cry.  That wasn’t insignificant.  And, somehow, it wasn’t good.

            It should be good.  It should be a positive step, a mark in his favor, something he could make the most of.

            But it wasn’t.  It wasn’t good.  He didn’t like it.  It displeased him.  Unsettled him.

            Breaking the royal farmer’s hold, Xio Voe stepped back and closed the door.  Locked it.

            He wanted to see the pharaoh.

            He couldn’t see the pharaoh until he’d done more research.

            His plans, suddenly, his strategy, seemed less important.  Seemed petty and inconvenient and misguided, when what he really wanted was to be near, be with, the pharaoh.

            But he had to stay on his path.  He had to remember: his strategy was what would, ultimately, guarantee that he was with the pharaoh for the rest of his life.

            And that goal seemed, unexpectedly, more important than ever.

As much as it is like watching paint dry, Xoe Voe's slow connections to his emotions and how fragile they are I marvel over each time they occur.  I am pleased when I see them and I am also angry that Xoe voe's upbrining was bereft emotionally.   I can understand how it happened, Matthew has laid that clearly out.  That is was uninteninal emtional cruelty but it still is abuse in my books.
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« Reply #2 on: December 29, 2009, 01:57:11 PM »

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              Rini asked, “What did he give you?  What was his gift?”  Rini understood gifts as if they were a language, and he wanted to see what sort of gift Xio Voe would give Kudorin and what message it conveyed.

            Kudorin called it forth and there, on the table, it was.  On display in its box.  A necklace.  Six parallel rows of jewels perfectly catching the light.  A row of rubies glistening like wet pieces of candy, a row of erlachs as vivid as Anosanim’s eyes, a row of raskavets with the rarest of golden tones, a row of emeralds green as grass, a row of sapphires with a blue to shame the ocean and the sky, a row of purple diamonds of unparalleled depth and clarity, all six rows bound together with polished silver clasps, every stone dramatically cut and the size of Kudorin’s thumbnail.

            “Shit.”  Talin stared at it, rapidly memorizing.

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            “I don’t care how much it costs,” Rini said.  “It’s this, it’s perfect.  This is the perfect gift for you.”  His hands trembled.  “This gift, it’s the seven of us, it’s even made with silver instead of gold just for me, and each strand has nineteen stones, one for each god, this is you, it’s Anosukinom, it’s you, it’s - - this is the perfect gift for you, it was made for you, he bought it for you.  He didn’t just pick up something nice, he didn’t just get something expensive, he got something made for you.”

            “By coincidence,” Desin argued, “because it was there.”

            “Oh, Kudorin,” Anosanim said, dabbing at his eyes.  “I simply don’t know what you’re going to offer him when you propose.  What could ever be better than this?”

            “Kudorin’s going to offer him love, understanding, and human emotion,” Desin snapped.  “Xio Voe might as well have given him a box of dirt, for all this means.”

            A moment of silence passed.

            “Wow,” Talin said.  “And people say that I’m insensitive.”

Further to the point about Xoe Voe's emotions made above I also think he does trust his instints, maybe more so now that Kudorin, Remin and he had he conversation about being in touch with his Gods.  I wonder when Xoe Voe bought Kudorin his engagement gift how much was guded by his Gods and how much was his Gods placing the right gift in the right place and Xoe Voe trusting his instincts.  Like Rini says the gift is perfect.
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« Reply #3 on: December 29, 2009, 02:31:21 PM »

A quote comes to mind...

"No man is worth your tears, and the one who is won't make you cry."

A wise man said those words, and that man is.... Brian Littrell.  Oh, be quiet, he's the first one I heard that quote from.

Now, with that said, I could argue that the fact that Xio Voe made Kudorin crz means that he ought to be flayed alive, whether figuratively or literally would be your choice.  Granted, he came to his sense and realized that he was indeed in love with Kudorin, so maybe the flaying out to be figuratively only.  In either case, evil, mean Xio Voe, making the love of your life cry that way.

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« Reply #4 on: December 30, 2009, 03:31:25 AM »

What I find interesting is that Kudorin wished to experience the full complexity as a man to fall in Love.  Though Xoe Voe is a challenge he is a challenge worthy of Kudorin, the man and Anosukonim the God.  Often falling in love brings tears of pain and frustration as well as tears of joy.  I alway thought of this chapter as a bit of "beware of what you wish for because you may get it."  Kudorin sure has in the form of Xoe Voe.  I think his love is deeper because they do have these challenges.
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« Reply #5 on: December 30, 2009, 12:09:15 PM »

New thoughts added to the quotes so I am refresshing the topic, just in case they trigger some thoughts for discussion.
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