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« on: July 30, 2011, 07:14:10 AM »

HOLY HOTTINESS REMIN   Dancey

That was hot !!    Great chapter !!  Glad to see things moving along pretty well.  Cheesy

I loved XV talk with Remin...it was kind of funny  Giggle
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« Reply #1 on: July 30, 2011, 07:22:38 AM »

Not done yet, but omg:

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I’m dying of thirst, sitting beside a creek, waiting for the rain to come.  It’s time for me to plunge into the water.”
Holy cow, he NAILS it and is still clueless! Sitting beside a creek waiting for the rain to come = standing beside Naritano waiting for the perfect man to walk in. He's going to feel like such an idiot when the rest of his family tells him they all knew it was Tano all along.
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« Reply #2 on: July 30, 2011, 09:32:16 AM »

Okay now the make out session in the kitchen! Did anyone else need to change their underwear after? LMAO! That was HOT! And yes I think for the first few times Remin is definitely going to top, he has a lot of pent up passion to release. But I can see Tano topping as well, he seemed to like the idea of Remin tied up. *snickers*

And thank the gods for Xio Voe. He was able to get Remin, who was obviously suffering from sleep dep to think clearly. He definitely wasn't making much sense. Tano also sees that Remin has nothing to feel guilty about and is baking him a cake in to thank him. Cheesy

Okay now I want the next chapter......this is going to be a long week.
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« Reply #3 on: July 30, 2011, 12:08:13 PM »

And the chain of great last lines continues!  "I've wasted Xio Voe's time."   Laughing  I love it.

I'm hoping that MUCH more happens next week.   Buzzy
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« Reply #4 on: July 30, 2011, 07:17:13 PM »

Moments that blew my mind:

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Naritano’s chest rose and fell with unsteady breaths.  “You can throw me in prison for disobedience to the throne.  You can exile me for treason.”  His voice shook.  “But you can’t make me stop worrying about you.”

            No.  That hadn’t been what he’d said.

            He’d said, and Remin’s ears rang with it, “You can’t make me stop loving you.
Aaaahhhh!

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Flexing his fingers around the fabric in his grasp, struggling with himself, well aware of how much danger he was in, craving just one more instant, just one more breath, just one more, Remin dragged Naritano’s body closer, nuzzling hungrily to rub his face against Naritano’s, unable to resist taking that skin on skin contact, and their bodies collided, Naritano strong and lean and masculine against him, Naritano’s erection stiff and substantial against his thigh.  Naritano’s long groan at the contact echoed in his ear.

            There was no longer a single rational thought in Remin’s brain.  He acted solely on instinct, acted solely from memory and experience.  Licking across Naritano’s soft, parted lips, he kissed his way into Naritano’s wet mouth.  With a sharp, hungry breath, Naritano kissed him back, taking possession of his tongue.
Shocked

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Kicking away his pants, catching Remin in the circle of his legs, thighs hugging Remin tightly as his ankles crossed and drew Remin more tightly against him, Naritano dragged Remin’s face up for a long, consuming kiss.  The hot intimacy of it, the scorching passion they shared, the way Naritano’s need impossibly matched his own, all unleashed a ferocious voracity in Remin, and as Naritano kissed along his jaw, licking, sucking, nibbling at his ear and caressing his neck and panting with desire, Remin mounted the counter, crawling over Naritano, finding Naritano’s embrace more thrilling and responsive and eager for him than any in his memory, and he couldn’t understand why he was still dressed, couldn’t stand another second of not feeling flesh on flesh, it had been so long, so very long, and he put a hand to his own chest, finding the first button.
Dead Faint I don't know about anyone else, but I kind of felt the urge for a cigarette after these two separated.

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He’d thought that he’d already stepped into the best spot of his life.  Now, the second opportunity of a lifetime opened before him.  Was he bold and selfish enough to jump at it?  Was he really arrogant enough to think that he deserved to step into the role of Prince Remin’s sex partner?

            Prince Remin might not want him in that role.  Having anyone at his disposal, Prince Remin could afford to be selective.  But Naritano had to try.
I love that Tano is going to go after it, go after Remin. Remin needs someone to push. I love that he recognizes that he'd be a good partner for Remin, at least in this way.


And Remin's conversation with Xio Voe was full of awesome, my favorite of which was this:

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“Then no one is ever able to consent to sexual acts with members of the Anorian royal family, and charges of rape must be filed immediately.  Shall I send someone to warn Prince Ebutadesin before he strikes again?'
Rolling on the Floor Laughing "before he strikes again"!  Rolling on the Floor Laughing
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« Reply #5 on: August 02, 2011, 05:14:51 AM »

I... can't log in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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« Reply #6 on: August 02, 2011, 09:42:13 AM »

I... can't log in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! Shocked

Hope you can get the issue resolved soon...this is not a chapter you want to miss.  Pet Pet
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« Reply #7 on: August 03, 2011, 02:12:03 AM »

I still can't log in, but Sue sent me the chapter last night.  I'm going to unsubscribe and resubscribe to get a new password and username, you never know if that's it.

The problem now is mostly that I can't get on the website from home anymore (I'm at work now), and I have no idea why.

The chapter was... fantastic!!!  Absolutely amazing!  Ask Sue how I kept reacting.  I was freaking out.

*dances*   Remin's figuring it out, Remin's figuring it out  Floating Hearts

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« Reply #8 on: August 03, 2011, 09:06:45 AM »

Could be that your browser doesn't recognize the cetificate and won't allow the site to open. I get that sometimes with FB. My browser won't allow FB to load. Try using another browser.  I usually have to wait a bit then close my browser & open a new window. Could also be that either your browser or computer has tagged it as a malicious site and won't let it load ....Just a idea, I'm no computer tech, everything I know is self taught. Thinking

Glad you got to read it though, it was a wonderful chapter. Love
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« Reply #9 on: August 04, 2011, 08:33:07 AM »

No, what happened is that PayPal CANCELLED my subscription.  This is the second time they've done this.  It's ridiculous, and now I don't even know if I'll be able to get onto the site at home.  If I have to keep doing it from work, it'll get me in trouble.

It's pissing me off, to say the least.
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« Reply #10 on: August 04, 2011, 09:03:40 AM »

Bad Paypal. No No
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