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LilacMajesty
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« on: February 13, 2009, 06:20:31 PM »
Hey Rhia, if you haven't read "Two Bodies" yet - I would suggest you tackle that one next.  I always have to take a looooong cold shower after I read it.
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« Reply #1 on: February 13, 2009, 06:54:15 PM »
"Two Bodies."  Shower.

Now I'm thinking about Bruce showering, thinking about Cory...

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...he couldn’t help but wonder if he’d left smudges on Cory’s tiny, sweet pink nipples.  The idea was tantalizing.  And the way that Cory had whispered that soft, haunting, desire-filled, “You’re dirty...”  Bruce tugged on his stiffening dick with a soapy hand, closing his eyes.

-Matthew
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« Reply #2 on: February 13, 2009, 07:08:11 PM »
I LOVE this story.  It's one of my favorite shorts (top 3).  And it's so wonderfully LONG!  ::dies of happiness:: 

Every time I read it, I just fall in love with Bruce right along with Cory, and with Cory right along with Bruce.  They're so, so different, but the way they see each other is amazing, and part of why this story's so captivating to me. 

- Jae
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« Reply #3 on: February 13, 2009, 07:24:06 PM »
Thank you!  What terrific comments.  I appreciate it.

Something about the obsessive nature of the story, how driven Bruce is to be with Cory, appeals to me.  (I like to write about obsessive love.  A lot.  I should probably have that checked.)

Also, it's awesome to meet the love of your life while starring in porn.  I have to write more stories like that.

-Matthew
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« Reply #4 on: February 14, 2009, 04:29:26 PM »
I can't remember much of it. Guess I should go and re-read it...
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« Reply #5 on: February 17, 2009, 06:45:07 PM »
Just finished reading that story.  I loved it! 
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« Reply #6 on: February 17, 2009, 06:52:26 PM »
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Just finished reading that story.  I loved it!

Thank you!

-Matthew
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« Reply #7 on: February 18, 2009, 03:02:06 AM »
Quote from: LilacMajesty on February 13, 2009, 06:20:31 PM
Hey Rhia, if you haven't read "Two Bodies" yet - I would suggest you tackle that one next.  I always have to take a looooong cold shower after I read it.

Eee! Sorry, I was out of town, and I didn't see this. I've read it, though.  Smiley It's perdy.
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